Number of comments: 2 (post new comment)
From Von on 03/23/2008
Carolelained, your story was good but you need a beta. When you find one, please continue to write.
From Nina on 03/22/2008
I like the story, but have a hard time reading through everything. I think what would help your story is if you get a beta. Beta are people who would help you deal with grammar and sentence flow.
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